I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Thursday, 20 August 2020
Wednesday, 3 April 2019
The north pole
I decided to go to the north pole to discover what type of animals live there. When I first arrived it was freezing cold.
I looked around for a little while and saw a bunch of animals but I wasn't interested, I found the my favourite animal a POLAR BEAR. There was one tiny little problem the polar bear could harm you if you get to close.
I could see a little coloured thing under its fur, I slowly crawled to the polar bear and i read the tag it read. This polar bear has been trained you do not need to worry it has a tracking system so if you get hurt we know and we will send help.
I discovered a lot of things about a polar bear. I returned to New Zealand and told all my science buddies all about what I saw and what I discovered.
I looked around for a little while and saw a bunch of animals but I wasn't interested, I found the my favourite animal a POLAR BEAR. There was one tiny little problem the polar bear could harm you if you get to close.
I could see a little coloured thing under its fur, I slowly crawled to the polar bear and i read the tag it read. This polar bear has been trained you do not need to worry it has a tracking system so if you get hurt we know and we will send help.
I discovered a lot of things about a polar bear. I returned to New Zealand and told all my science buddies all about what I saw and what I discovered.
Tuesday, 23 October 2018
Bridges
This slide show is about bridges. We have been learning about bridges because there is a new expressway going through Ōtaki.
Monday, 3 September 2018
I am a horse poem
I am a horse🐴
I am a horse that gallops around wildly
I wonder what it would be like if I wasn’t caged in the stables
I hear wolves howling through the night
I see lions in action ready to pounce
I want to be wild and free
I am a kaimanawa horse
I pretend to be free even though I’m now in the a stable
I feel lonely that none of the other horses are like me
I touch my mum in hope
I cry every now and then
I worry about my herd every day
I am owned by people who don’t take care of me
I understand that my herd miss me
I say that I will come home
I dream to be free
I try to escape every night
I hope I can help horses in danger
I am a kaimanawa horse who wishes to be free
Friday, 22 June 2018
Mystery Writing
Mystery Writing
Have you ever had one of your best friends gone missing? I have Ellie Woods she suffered from anxiety and depression. she was my very best friend.
Ellie lived in the woods. she rowed across the lake to her house bawling her eyes out. When I came to see her the boat was in the middle of the lake. I was really Confused because I have never seen it there before. When I swam across the lake and got the boat tied up, I went inside, Ellie’s parents were crying so much there were puddles everywhere. A couple of days later I came to see if Ellie was back but when I arrived the police were there. They had the equipment that Ellie had before she disappeared.
I asked, “Where is Ellie?” The police responded with “You shouldn’t be here right now and what was she wearing before she disappeared?”
I replied, “she had a black long sleeved top with blue denim shorts with superstars.” The police started to write the information down and questioned me, About like 100 hours later just kidding probably like 10 minutes later I retreated to the boat. When I was just about to sit it I found Ellie’s phone, I grabbed it and entered her password and there was a voicemail from my phone. I was so confused I opened it. It was Ellie's voice, the voice mail said.
“Hi stella if you found my phone good job I meant to say goodbye, I'm so sorry for not saying it but this is the last time you'll hear my voice. I wish you best of luck.”
I screamed in horror, I ran to the old bridge. I just broke down into tears. Then I looked down into the river under the bridge and I saw her shoes. That was the time I got down and ran to the police.
I was so scared, when I got there I ran up to officer Pete. He said, “Take us to the place.” So we ran as fast as our legs could go. It was so devastating to see that her body was in the river. I cried so hard.
Ten days later the police came to my house and announced the Ellie had drowned herself because she was bullied at school and tired of seeing the 19 year olds physically hurting her inside and out.
To this day there's a hole in my heart for Ellie. I visit her grave everyday with flowers in my hand. she’ll always be by my side.
Edited by Bailey
Very good by Hannah
Have you ever had one of your best friends gone missing? I have Ellie Woods she suffered from anxiety and depression. she was my very best friend.
Ellie lived in the woods. she rowed across the lake to her house bawling her eyes out. When I came to see her the boat was in the middle of the lake. I was really Confused because I have never seen it there before. When I swam across the lake and got the boat tied up, I went inside, Ellie’s parents were crying so much there were puddles everywhere. A couple of days later I came to see if Ellie was back but when I arrived the police were there. They had the equipment that Ellie had before she disappeared.
I asked, “Where is Ellie?” The police responded with “You shouldn’t be here right now and what was she wearing before she disappeared?”
I replied, “she had a black long sleeved top with blue denim shorts with superstars.” The police started to write the information down and questioned me, About like 100 hours later just kidding probably like 10 minutes later I retreated to the boat. When I was just about to sit it I found Ellie’s phone, I grabbed it and entered her password and there was a voicemail from my phone. I was so confused I opened it. It was Ellie's voice, the voice mail said.
“Hi stella if you found my phone good job I meant to say goodbye, I'm so sorry for not saying it but this is the last time you'll hear my voice. I wish you best of luck.”
I screamed in horror, I ran to the old bridge. I just broke down into tears. Then I looked down into the river under the bridge and I saw her shoes. That was the time I got down and ran to the police.
I was so scared, when I got there I ran up to officer Pete. He said, “Take us to the place.” So we ran as fast as our legs could go. It was so devastating to see that her body was in the river. I cried so hard.
Ten days later the police came to my house and announced the Ellie had drowned herself because she was bullied at school and tired of seeing the 19 year olds physically hurting her inside and out.
To this day there's a hole in my heart for Ellie. I visit her grave everyday with flowers in my hand. she’ll always be by my side.
Edited by Bailey
Very good by Hannah
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